SCRIPT RE WRITE by Melville

So far in our script re write we have managed to re plan the first Ross time lapse scene to shots where Ross will be wrapping some flowers in his split screen and in the other split screen Victoria will be receiving them, this is to help show how Ross wins the girl back. We are also changing the texting scene at the metro station to an alternative method of Ross asking Victoria out again, however that scene is still under development. I feel if we film the flowers shot correctly, we will fix our narrative problem, before it looked like Ross getting dumped and moping until the girl came back. However, if we add the flower scene and maybe an additional act of love in there too, we will fix the problem our media teachers outlined to us.