Feedback

Our feed back outlined some key issues we have to change in our final cut. The points being;
1) Change the singers clothing (we were thinking a waistcoat)
2) Change some locations (the main change in location will be the scene where the singer is at the bus stop)
3) Reduce the length of the shots (some of our shots were far too long, we are going to split up any lengthy shots into 2 or 3 different ones along with speeding up the transition to keep the editing fast)
4) Fix the focus on the shots (make sure everything is in focus)
5) Improve plot (we were told that the guy in our video needs to do something romantic to earn the girl back so that the plot will be obvious to the viewer. We were thinking of getting the guy to buy her some flowers etc)

Once all of these things have been fixed, we should have a A/B grade music video and we're in the process of changing the video to suit our feedback at the moment and so far, 2 weeks in, everything is going great!

Joe Melville