Friday, 10 October 2014

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*Girl looking in her mirror getting ready to go out
*She smiles then walks into a room to see her boyfriend
*He isn't ready
*As he shuffles out of the room she roles her eyes
*Later at a coffee shop the boy gets two drinks
*She goes to talk to him but he is on his phone with an ear bud in
*Fed up she stares off into the distace
*Later she is o the sofa with him
*She turns her head to talk to him
*He stares at the tv
*She looks back as he offers ercrisps without looking her in the eye
*She trys again andshe is ignored again
*We then see the grl in the kitchen writing a note
*She sticks it on the fridge
*They boy then walks in to read the break up note
*He scrumples it up and then chucks it, missing the bin
*He takes a deep breath by the sink
*And we see her at the bus stop
*We then see him in his house, doin things to pass the time
(splitscreen)
*we hen see them bothon a chair the get up and walk in alternate directions
*He is in the park and she is in a coffee shop
*They both stare off into the distnce
*Now they are on puplic transport, looking out the window.
(split screen over)
*Boy type a  text "Wanna come over"
*The girl smiles and texts "Yeah x"
(split screen)
*We ee there feet walk doen the street, then both of them walk confidently
(splitscreen over)
*We then see the boy tiding up the house ready for her
*He find the note on the floor
*He looks up and smiles
(splitscreen)
*We get a shot of them getting dressed, smartly
*While he waits she walks down the streetshe rings the doorbell
*They look each other in the eye
*He pulls her into his frame
-Cut to black-

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